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英语作文征集!!!

英语作文征集!!!

在5月结束之前,凡写出以下英语作文中的任意一篇的(不少于7句),将评出各类奖项,积分狂赚啊!
作文:1.My Parents
          2.Happy Days
         3.a letter to my teather
奖项:1.最佳作文奖(3名,每篇一名)+20威望,+100金钱,+50贡献,+200文采
   2.优秀作文奖(10名)+15威望,+75金钱,+40贡献,+150文采
   3.特别创意奖(2名)+50威望,+50金钱,+50贡献,+100文采
我会请彩虹等人当评委,公正地加分哦!
只要参与,一篇加10威望、金钱、贡献、文采!
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My Parents

My father is a policeman.He is tall.He is strong.He is friendly.He always piay badminton with me.My mother is a teather.She is nice. She always useful and frindly.She likes reading books.She usually go shopping with me.l like my parents.

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怎么样???????????
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  • wallyy 贡献 +10 原创内容,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-13 18:08
  • wallyy 金钱 +10 原创内容,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-13 18:08
  • wallyy 威望 +10 原创内容,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-13 18:08
  • wallyy 文采 +10 原创内容,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-13 18:08

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不错!加分!

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呵呵

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Happy  Day
Yesterday was Children's Day. We had a good time. l and my friends had a party at my house. At seven o'clock, my gests arrived at my house. We played hide- and- seek together. My mother bought a big nice cake for us.We were very happy. We ate cake.The cake was nice. At last, we sang songs. What a happy day!
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  • wallyy 文采 +15 不错不错,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-22 19:10
  • wallyy 贡献 +20 不错不错,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-22 19:10
  • wallyy 金钱 +30 不错不错,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-22 19:10
  • wallyy 威望 +10 不错不错,先加这么多,多多写啊! 2008-5-22 19:10

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My Parents
Hi, l'm Sherry. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and l. My father is a manager. He is tall. He is strong. He is good at maths. So he often help with my maths.He can play tennis. He often plays tennis with me. My mother is a Chinese teacher. She is tall, too. She is beautiful and clever. She is good at Chinese. But she doesn' t help me with my Chinese. She wants me to finish my homework by myself. She likes jogging. Because it is good for our health. l love my parents. And they love me, too.
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  • wallyy 文采 +30 呵呵,第二次翻倍!!! 2008-5-22 19:11
  • wallyy 贡献 +40 呵呵,第二次翻倍!!! 2008-5-22 19:11
  • wallyy 金钱 +60 呵呵,第二次翻倍!!! 2008-5-22 19:11
  • wallyy 威望 +20 呵呵,第二次翻倍!!! 2008-5-22 19:11

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我这篇文章可以得什么奖?

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回复 8# 的帖子

是四五年级写的,你几年级?

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不过不错,加油!

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她五年级!!!我的同学!!!

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英语是我的强项!

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英语是我的弱项,虽然我是课代表,但还是超级烂
(好矛盾哦??----WALLYY)

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啊——英语课代表英语怎么能差呢?

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A Letter to My Teacher
Dear Miss Zhang:
         l'm Sherry. l'm one of your students. After the summer vacatiao, l'll go to middle school. l'll study hard there. l always think you are a good teacher. Because when l have questions, you always give me a hand. So now l have a good mark. l want to be an English teacher in the future. l'm good at English. l hope my dream will come true. And l hope you will be healthy all the time.

                                                                                                                                                  Your student
                                                                                                                                                  Sherry
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  • wallyy 威望 +10 原创内容,不错! 2008-5-27 14:34
  • wallyy 金钱 +30 原创内容,不错! 2008-5-27 14:34
  • wallyy 贡献 +20 原创内容,不错! 2008-5-27 14:34
  • wallyy 文采 +50 原创内容,不错! 2008-5-27 14:34

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呵呵。。。。。。多多捧场啊

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回复 3# 960618 的帖子

你几年级?.

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Happy  Day
Hi,l'm  Carol. Yesterday  was  my bithday. There  were  many friends of  my   classmatesat  the party. My  best  friend, Helen  gave  me  an  interesting  book  and  some  chocolate. l  was  very  happy  about  that. We  played  hide - and -seek  together. We  sang  "Happy  birthday ". Then, l  blew  out  the  candles  on  my  birthday  cake. We  ate  thecake. We  were  all  very  happy.
What  a  happy  day !
是birthday哦
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  • wallyy 文采 +40 不错! 2008-5-27 14:35
  • wallyy 贡献 +10 不错! 2008-5-27 14:35
  • wallyy 金钱 +20 不错! 2008-5-27 14:35
  • wallyy 威望 +30 不错! 2008-5-27 14:35
~~~~~~我爱动物~~~~~

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A Letter to My Teacher
Dear Miss Zhang:
          l'm Sherry. l'm one of your students. After the summer vacatian, l'll go to middle school. l'll study hard there. When l was in Grade One, l dislike studying Chinese. l think it is difficult. But you tell me Chinese is an interesting subject. Let me like this subject. So l think you are a good teacher. You always give me a hand. l want to say " Thank you!" to you. l want to be a Chinese teacher. l hope my dream will come true. And l hope you will be healthy all the time.

                                                                                                                   Your student
                                                                                                                   Sherry

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重复发了???

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E................

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